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So turn me upside down
& spill my thoughts to the canvas,
I'll color you a tragedy.
And you'll laugh and you'll cry
At the story of a shining girl who lost herself,
somewhere between love and longing
And the boy with her map scrawled across his chest.
And you'll smile at how colorful she is.
You should watch closely as the picture paints itself
Because mine is a story about a girl with a socket for a heart
The boy with the plug that fit so right
And how he lit her through and through.
And as the story comes to an end,
You'll ache with empathy and stare at the blotches
While you notice that the colors are fading
And they aren't so bright any longer.
Because this is a story of a fluorescent girl
That fell for a colorblind boy-
A boy that tried, but couldn't love her back
Because all he saw was shades of grey.
©2006-2010 ~fleetingyouth
:iconfleetingyouth:

Author's Comments

Yeah, so. We all need to be a little teenage angsty once in a great while.
And in English, I figured it was my time.

Here we go.

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:iconlua1365:
yay good job! :aww:

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the nights not over, youre not trying hard enough
our lives are changing lanes
you ran me off the road
the wait is over, im now taking over
youre no longer laughing
im not driving fast enough
:icongoofy113:
awww.how sad..

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I've got to go somewhere...
:icongoofy113:
i like the line

"The boy with the plug that fit so right
And how he lit her through and through."

very touching imagery!

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I've got to go somewhere...
:iconfleetingyouth:
yay! thanks!

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i'll take some time as you gather your thoughts
meet you in 5 baby, down by the rocks
:iconfleetingyouth:
:'[

don't worry, it's not really about me.

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i'll take some time as you gather your thoughts
meet you in 5 baby, down by the rocks
:iconfleetingyouth:
Thanksssssssss

I like you!
And it's an honor. :]

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i'll take some time as you gather your thoughts
meet you in 5 baby, down by the rocks
:iconplayswithmatches:
i think you should read it in class

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We try again and again but love is never the same
oberst makes it better
:heart:
:iconfleetingyouth:
yeah.

too bad i'm a wuss.

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i'll take some time as you gather your thoughts
meet you in 5 baby, down by the rocks
:iconajax1753:
wow, i like it.

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"But I being poor, have only my dreams.
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
tread softly, because you tread on my dreams."

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